gotta agree with the guy below.

this track has tons of potential, but lacks in the basics. I love the melody, and your knowledge of music production seems high enough that you could make this into something truly amazing. However, there are a few things that need improvement.

(A.) clipping. one of the many woes of music production and one of the hardest things to gain skill over, in my book. try adding a limiter on the master channel, but lower the attack and decay settings. then lower the volume of the all the instruments. This is assuming that you are using FL Studio.

(B.) repetitiveness. This song has an excellent melody, and you really manage to pull it off in the beginning, but then it gets old very fast and loses interest. try working with the melody so that it repeats one way, then the next time, it plays another way. I know I'm not giving too much help here, but it's really more of a skill learned through experience rather than taught.

(C.) choose different synths. I get the distinct inpression that you used the fl keys plugin for the piano, and a lot of the other synths sound a LOT like sytrus. These plugins are great, but they are extensively overused. Try to be more original by using an external vst for your work.

that's all I can think of. Nice work on this! contact me when it is finished. however, I am no longer using this account. contact this account instead:

trancecrafter.newgrounds.com

7/10 3/5

Ow....

You should reduce a lot of the squeakiness of the sounds your using. It actually hurt my ears to listen to the high pitched sample you have looped. Had to turn the volume down.

I like your effort though! Nice beat you got there. Try to give it more of a melody. That bassdrum could use some more "punch" too.

nice use of effect though. I can seriously imagine this song with a few slight changes, and it could be seriously awesome. Just need to get the basics down first.